Remove unneeded "will"s + minor fixes

[lttng-docs.git] / contents / using-lttng / controlling-tracing / lttng-live.md

diff --git a/contents/using-lttng/controlling-tracing/lttng-live.md b/contents/using-lttng/controlling-tracing/lttng-live.md
index 1f932f58ba2b4f622d7cf6fa8007fd6fad2730d4..dbe69309e6a89e53b3283284684c159c187dbd51 100644 (file)
--- a/contents/using-lttng/controlling-tracing/lttng-live.md
+++ b/contents/using-lttng/controlling-tracing/lttng-live.md
@@ -14,9 +14,8 @@ _LTTng live_.
 
 LTTng live is implemented, in LTTng, solely on the relay daemon side.
 As trace data is sent over the network to a relay daemon by a (possibly
-remote) consumer daemon, a _tee_ may be created: trace data will be
-recorded to trace files _as well as_ being transmitted to a
-connected live viewer:
+remote) consumer daemon, a _tee_ is created: trace data is recorded to
+trace files _as well as_ being transmitted to a connected live viewer:
 
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     <object data="/images/docs26/lttng-live-relayd.svg" type="image/svg+xml">
@@ -31,18 +30,18 @@ mode on the target system:
 lttng create --live
 </pre>
 
-An optional parameter may be passed to `--live` to set the interval
-of time (in microseconds) between flushes to the network
-(1&nbsp;second is the default):
+An optional parameter may be passed to `--live` to set the period
+(in microseconds) between flushes to the network
+(1&nbsp;second is the default). With:
 
 <pre class="term">
 lttng create --live 100000
 </pre>
 
-will flush every 100&nbsp;ms.
+the daemons flush their data every 100&nbsp;ms.
 
 If no network output is specified to the `create` command, a local
-relay daemon will be spawned. In this very common case, viewing a live
+relay daemon is spawned. In this very common case, viewing a live
 trace is easy: enable events and start tracing as usual, then use
 `lttng view` to start the default live viewer:
 
@@ -50,7 +49,7 @@ trace is easy: enable events and start tracing as usual, then use
 lttng view
 </pre>
 
-The correct arguments will be passed to the live viewer so that it
+The correct arguments are passed to the live viewer so that it
 may connect to the local relay daemon and start reading live events.
 
 You may also wish to use a live viewer not running on the target